07-05-2017, 11:18 PM
(07-05-2017, 10:53 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Thanks for reading everyone.It's a worry. Pedantically, "text" IS a noun, not a verb...so used you would have to tense it... So, I WILL text you, I am TEXTING you, I TEXTED you.... harrrrruuummmmmpppphhhhh!
@tectak - I researched it beforehand and I'm still unsure.
@Todd, Keith - I wanted there to be some ambiguity as to whether the sex was extramarital or not. - An exploration of the connotations of the word "lover" if you will. The last line falls a little flat for this reason.
I also intended the elevator to be descending from an apartment more than ascending an office building. - That's how I arrived at 20 minutes after some deliberation. Thanks for the observations. I have a few tweaks to consider.
Paul
I guess the confusion is because narratively speaking(
) one can say "Text me.." Oh, the modern world....


