07-05-2017, 10:53 PM
Thanks for reading everyone.
@tectak - I researched it beforehand and I'm still unsure.
@Todd, Keith - I wanted there to be some ambiguity as to whether the sex was extramarital or not. - An exploration of the connotations of the word "lover" if you will. The last line falls a little flat for this reason.
I also intended the elevator to be descending from an apartment more than ascending an office building. - That's how I arrived at 20 minutes after some deliberation. Thanks for the observations. I have a few tweaks to consider.
Paul
@tectak - I researched it beforehand and I'm still unsure.
@Todd, Keith - I wanted there to be some ambiguity as to whether the sex was extramarital or not. - An exploration of the connotations of the word "lover" if you will. The last line falls a little flat for this reason.
I also intended the elevator to be descending from an apartment more than ascending an office building. - That's how I arrived at 20 minutes after some deliberation. Thanks for the observations. I have a few tweaks to consider.
Paul