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Edit 1: Banality
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07-04-2017, 06:47 AM
(07-04-2017, 03:33 AM)The Four-Eyed Cat Wrote: I've updated the post to include my first edit. I hope that i took out alot of the mistakes in this one and that it is a step towards the right direction!Good start. Now read it out loud and punctuate it to clarity. Make up you mind regarding capitalisation of line starts...for me, no....unless punctuation so requires. Best, tectak |
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Edit 1: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-30-2017, 02:24 AM
RE: Banality - by vagabond - 06-30-2017, 03:35 AM
RE: Banality - by dukealien - 06-30-2017, 07:25 AM
RE: Banality - by CRNDLSM - 07-03-2017, 02:00 AM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-03-2017, 05:59 AM
RE: Banality - by Richard - 07-03-2017, 12:05 PM
RE: Banality - by Achebe - 07-03-2017, 04:47 PM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-03-2017, 10:34 PM
RE: Banality - by Achebe - 07-03-2017, 10:52 PM
RE: Banality - by tectak - 07-04-2017, 12:29 AM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-04-2017, 01:27 AM
RE: Banality - by tectak - 07-04-2017, 01:45 AM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-04-2017, 03:33 AM
RE: Banality - by tectak - 07-04-2017, 06:47 AM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-04-2017, 07:08 AM
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