Edit 1: Banality
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(06-30-2017, 02:24 AM)The Four-Eyed Cat Wrote:  Through streets littered with 
tin cans and chit-chat,
I’m making my way home on a mellow Tuesday evening.
While I wait for a train
that goes my direction,
I decide to add to the mess
by lighting up a cigarette.
I inhale deeply as
my lips kiss the bud;
stale smoke numbing my throat
a feeling like that of a sore love-story.
Moments pass by like pedestrians
when I spot a faint rumble
coming from a near distance;
then
Pa-dum-dum, Pa-dum-dum, Pa-dum-dum
 
It’s that distinct sound
of going home,
presented by a carriage
that is marked with graffiti
and the occasional spot of rust.
It slowly grinds to a halt
with a loud screech and a whir.
An example of where you might go with this
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Edit 1: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-30-2017, 02:24 AM
RE: Banality - by vagabond - 06-30-2017, 03:35 AM
RE: Banality - by dukealien - 06-30-2017, 07:25 AM
RE: Banality - by CRNDLSM - 07-03-2017, 02:00 AM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-03-2017, 05:59 AM
RE: Banality - by Richard - 07-03-2017, 12:05 PM
RE: Banality - by Achebe - 07-03-2017, 04:47 PM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-03-2017, 10:34 PM
RE: Banality - by Achebe - 07-03-2017, 10:52 PM
RE: Banality - by tectak - 07-04-2017, 12:29 AM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-04-2017, 01:27 AM
RE: Banality - by tectak - 07-04-2017, 01:45 AM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-04-2017, 03:33 AM
RE: Banality - by tectak - 07-04-2017, 06:47 AM
RE: Banality - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-04-2017, 07:08 AM



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