The Wife

[Keith]

I really like this short Tiger, I wish I had'nt read Todds comments because I agree with most and don't have much more to add so I'm going to be specific, but they are just my thoughts. See comments, best Keith

The Wife
 
He still had lover's breath Strong opener we are plunged into the scene
as he jumped the elevator I like that this gives us a setting tall office block maybe, but it needs something more. could be crowded?
twenty minutes before the interview twenty mins is a long time this makes me think he's leaving an appartment building so I'm not sure maybe 10 mins
when she text,
 
Everything will be fine, my darling. This end doesnt work hard enough in such a short poem maybe link it back to the sex some how? I think your wearing my pants