06-27-2017, 08:40 PM
Hi Billy!
Thank you for the feedback. I'll try to do my best in cutting it down to iambic pentameter (I still have to read up on it, as i only have a faint idea)
Regarding the son - If the therapist is the father, then the father is dead. I wanted to play on this, that the entire interview is just a
delirium of sorts. Eventually i just liked the ring of the amicably saying 'son', (like a police officer does every now and then to someone younger).
Thank you for the feedback. I'll try to do my best in cutting it down to iambic pentameter (I still have to read up on it, as i only have a faint idea)
Regarding the son - If the therapist is the father, then the father is dead. I wanted to play on this, that the entire interview is just a
delirium of sorts. Eventually i just liked the ring of the amicably saying 'son', (like a police officer does every now and then to someone younger).