Frustrated

[nibbed]

thanks rivernotch

i like your removal of the third line,
in fact, all your tips were great.
I will need to clean up the poem a bit...
I guess what I was trying to paint
was pressure felt when someone
close in a relationship
wants to change a person
back into someone
they once were
(a resurrection, I guess)
or a life they turned away from
for their own good,
and all the frustration
involved in that scene.

I am honored you considered my poem,
thank you so much!

janine