Third Edit: Denial
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Hey elleblack,
Thanks for your feedback. It's funny because I actually played around with first line by switching from dark to darkness and back to dark before posting. My original fear was that "dark room" would conjure up images of someone developing photos.

Thanks again,
Richard
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Third Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-04-2017, 12:49 PM
RE: Denial - by ellajam - 06-04-2017, 06:28 PM
RE: Denial - by Achebe - 06-04-2017, 08:58 PM
RE: Denial - by RiverNotch - 06-05-2017, 12:55 AM
RE: Denial - by Richard - 06-05-2017, 03:26 AM
RE: Denial - by vagabond - 06-05-2017, 04:56 AM
RE: Denial - by ellajam - 06-05-2017, 08:12 AM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-05-2017, 01:12 PM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by Achebe - 06-05-2017, 09:10 PM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-06-2017, 11:02 AM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by elleblack - 06-07-2017, 05:00 AM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-07-2017, 11:11 AM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-09-2017, 08:21 AM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by nibbed - 06-09-2017, 11:58 AM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by nibbed - 06-09-2017, 08:40 PM
RE: First Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-10-2017, 11:49 AM
RE: Second Edit: Denial - by Richard - 06-16-2017, 12:42 PM
RE: Third Edit: Denial - by Richard - 08-26-2017, 05:02 AM
RE: Third Edit: Denial - by Todd - 08-26-2017, 05:56 AM
RE: Third Edit: Denial - by Richard - 08-26-2017, 11:47 AM



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