06-06-2017, 08:18 PM
Yes, indeed. It was more pleasant to pass not knowing knowing. Clever phrase. Nice flow. I haven't read much Haiku, so can't comment on the style itself. What I can say is this hits something universal we all experience and expresses it eloquently. It's a nice contrast with the unpleasant imagery generated with the phrase "High summer roadkill." It makes me want to read more Haiku.

