06-05-2017, 08:12 AM
Reading the crit on meaningless I think I was slow on the uptake, but still, dark with curtains drawn doesn't quite convince me that a mirror won't catch a glint of light. I guess that would still suit your metaphor, if not the level of depression you're going for. I'm on the fence. 
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