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You have some good things and not so good things.

Hey I just mess around with poetry and I've always wondered if it was any good at all so just let me know if this is even passable! Also i don't even know what the form is so don't worry about that.

Belief born of sight at the junction of faith sight of what
A man forever lost, origin without name is this man what you see, or are you the man
The greatest of plights, myself and my wraith I always want to use wraith with faith but it always sounds cheesy to me, 
to search and find the inception of flame is inception of flame the belief born of sight?

the colored crescent a mirage of the skyline
a cynical gift camouflaged behind sly time I actually like skyline and sly time
the treasure was promised indeed, in troves in troves huh for rhyme, although it's not out of place with the language you're using
Alas, all he has found are the emperor's clothes I dont like alas but it's not out of place either to me
lord falls low, jewel to thornclothes often represent righteousness, emperors clothes means naked? Kind of shamed?
Thin veil of grandeur forever torn 
mighty oak calls the humble leaf kin Maybe not all oaks are so friendly
See the tired traveler who could never be sin this the man who went from jewel to thorn
Crucify his god and deliver him to Eden 

The lofty language loses me, ultimately I don't t understand
  Belief born of sight of a man who lost everything, belief and the desire to kill him? Is Eden heaven, I guess deliver him to Eden means heaven will be earth at the end.  I don't know if it's any good, goodness, Good luck