Fauxku Choo Choo (the play's the thing)

[Radetof.Yahska]

Good poem...though I must note
it doesn't follow
this thread's guidelines.

Don't mind Ray ~
he doesn't follow
any thread's guidelines.

Just kidding. Fear the Death Ray.

     RAY is the Great God of Fauxky Chew Chew and the Sacred Keeper of the Rules   --   He can bend them to His will at will.

                All lesser beings must adhere to them or suffer the fate of joyful ignorance.

---

Footprints smaller now - 
summer sand

Falling rain
Wipe this slate clean


Edit: Assuming it was the length and not the theme.

Your length was not the problem, grasshopper, it was your failure to obey guideline 2:

2. Poem includes 2 significant words from the preceding one.
      (Tense and plurality may be changed -- homonyms, other inventive wordplay, is winked at.)

        While I'm sincerely sorry, you must now Suffer the fate of Joyful Ignorance!

Length not a problem
Grasshopper

Piddling on the porch
Little wee-wee

O joyful ignorance