05-25-2017, 08:15 PM
I wasn't concerned with any poetry rules, it's just the repeat in so small a space wasn't appealing. Though puppy eyes are appealing however they show up as long as I don't have to take them home permanently. Like kids. 
Maybe it will grow on me.
Maybe it will grow on me.
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