05-23-2017, 08:50 PM
(05-23-2017, 08:11 PM)billy Wrote: without the info, i thought it was the mountain coming back to life. i found the poem hard to get to grips with. too hard to be able to do a full and warranted piece of feedback on. it feels original, i feel i should be able to grasp it but i'm really struggling. for me it needs to be tied togther with a few more clear images. hopefully someone else can give you better feedback. welcome to the site.Thanks Billy. I threw in a minor edit - not sure if I should mark it as edited? I'm going to continue to think on how I can make it more clear.