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05-22-2017, 08:07 AM

(05-22-2017, 05:29 AM)Wjames Wrote: The only crit I can offer is to change "yearned" to "yearns" as it is not in the past tense (that stanza is beautiful by the way).

Oops, yes! Changed it.
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< having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 12:47 PM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by Wjames - 05-22-2017, 05:29 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-22-2017, 08:07 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by just mercedes - 05-22-2017, 08:43 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-22-2017, 11:04 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by nibbed - 05-23-2017, 08:01 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-23-2017, 09:03 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by ellajam - 05-23-2017, 11:04 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-23-2017, 11:21 AM

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