05-22-2017, 05:29 AM
The only crit I can offer is to change "yearned" to "yearns" as it is not in the past tense (that stanza is beautiful by the way).
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< having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 12:47 PM
RE: < having talked to an angel > - by Wjames - 05-22-2017, 05:29 AM
RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-22-2017, 08:07 AM
RE: < having talked to an angel > - by just mercedes - 05-22-2017, 08:43 AM
RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-22-2017, 11:04 AM
RE: < having talked to an angel > - by nibbed - 05-23-2017, 08:01 AM
RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-23-2017, 09:03 AM
RE: < having talked to an angel > - by ellajam - 05-23-2017, 11:04 AM
RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-23-2017, 11:21 AM
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