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05-17-2017, 04:10 AM
(05-16-2017, 06:30 PM)tectak Wrote: For me, though, the lack of credibility is a real let-down. I really want to believe in the character but the writer, with all the simplicity of ownership, keeps breaking through.Just so I make sure I'm tracking, were there other moments beside the "I don't know" couplet where you felt authorial intrusion? |
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see jane run - by Lizzie - 05-10-2017, 03:17 AM
RE: see jane run - by Todd - 05-10-2017, 04:20 AM
RE: see jane run - by Lizzie - 05-14-2017, 06:07 AM
RE: see jane run - by vagabond - 05-14-2017, 07:43 AM
RE: see jane run - by Lizzie - 05-15-2017, 07:01 AM
RE: see jane run - by vagabond - 05-11-2017, 07:05 AM
RE: see jane run - by burrealist - 05-11-2017, 07:14 AM
RE: see jane run - by nibbed - 05-14-2017, 09:57 AM
RE: see jane run - by 67eager - 05-14-2017, 05:31 PM
RE: See Jane Run, revision 1 - by vagabond - 05-15-2017, 07:31 AM
RE: See Jane Run, revision 1 - by Lizzie - 05-15-2017, 10:22 AM
RE: see jane run - by billy - 05-15-2017, 10:30 AM
RE: see jane run - by Lizzie - 05-17-2017, 01:45 AM
RE: see jane run - by Achebe - 05-15-2017, 01:14 PM
RE: see jane run - by burrealist - 05-16-2017, 05:09 AM
RE: see jane run - by tectak - 05-16-2017, 06:30 PM
RE: see jane run - by Lizzie - 05-17-2017, 04:10 AM
RE: see jane run - by tectak - 05-17-2017, 03:53 PM
RE: see jane run - by Lizzie - 05-18-2017, 12:40 AM
RE: see jane run - by tectak - 05-18-2017, 02:18 AM
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