05-15-2017, 06:38 AM
that´s a wrathful god your poem lets me see, a surprising thought (does not matter if the reader agrees with it)
"blood became a whisper" makes me think of "blood" as a metaphor for anger and "whisper" as a synonym for creation ("in the beginning was the word,.."). wow.
the stanza following "until I" to me seems to be from god´s perspective and him contemplating his Flood.
if this interpretation should not be written openly you could tell me how to use the spoiler tool
"blood became a whisper" makes me think of "blood" as a metaphor for anger and "whisper" as a synonym for creation ("in the beginning was the word,.."). wow.
the stanza following "until I" to me seems to be from god´s perspective and him contemplating his Flood.
if this interpretation should not be written openly you could tell me how to use the spoiler tool