05-14-2017, 07:04 PM
(05-14-2017, 10:51 AM)dukealien Wrote:(05-14-2017, 12:05 AM)LunaDeLore Wrote:To possibly alleviate confusion (though no reading is *wrong* - just what I was thinking when I wrote L3),(05-04-2017, 05:27 AM)dukealien Wrote: Historiesdukealian,
Victors’ history, chock-full
of grand self-serving lies
is true as any die
compared to stories losers tell.
any die? or any dye?....I'm not sure how to take L3. Maybe omitting the conjunction at the beginning of L3 could enhance the read as well. anyway, I like it and hope my suggestions help.
Luna
Good suggestions, all. Edit may result.
I liked that expression as well and I agree with you about bolt production.
Found this:
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

