05-14-2017, 02:39 AM
This is a serious subject, and hopefully, writing about it helps lesson the distressing impact of what you witnessed. But, I am a bit uneasy about phrases like ‘lick it off’ and ‘tastes like summer’
I agree with others, that it would have been better to link it to domestic violence in the poem itself, rather than in the introduction.
Keep going.
I agree with others, that it would have been better to link it to domestic violence in the poem itself, rather than in the introduction.
Keep going.