05-13-2017, 10:22 PM
(05-12-2017, 11:15 AM)billy Wrote: allow the reader to understand what you understand.Yeah. There's the rub. I'm going for the reader to feel what I don't understand. (& not just science).
Btw, I'm new to the concept of a "list poem" and that's what I'd like to explore here ... even as just a learning exercise.
Question .... Slightly better = "misbegotton" instead of "just begotten"? (although ideally I would like to sprinkle a little subtle religious phraseology)