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[rayheinrich]

ellajam and rayheinrich!
you are actually trying to tell me to change it back?
perhaps i can come up with a title that is neither too strange (since apparently nothing is plain false) nor too scientific.

For me, at least, I'd be happy with either title. While I think it's fun to discuss what various stuff means,
in the end it's your poem and you should follow your heart and/or brain.

Or: Fork them out and make two poems... oops, seems I've handed you another decision.

But if you're a decent writer, you'll not only be able to handle all of these decisions, you'll be able,
like all good writers, to worry about which and how many were correct for always.