05-12-2017, 04:57 AM
(05-11-2017, 08:01 PM)Achebe Wrote: .....or the lack of it? Nice!
Probably not the lack of it. If you have a regular 24 hour cycle (circadian rhythm) then it's just
being produced at a different time. irregular? The it gets really screwed up.

P.S. You can keep a balanced non-traditional 24 hour schedule if you do it this way:
(05-12-2017, 04:37 AM)vagabond Wrote: "Maybe "wipe my tears" needs a few words farther up in the poem to put it in context."
i intended that with "she rises the tides" .. gravity drawing water. tears are not a bad thing per se, hiding them is.
Oh, I didn't understand the correlation. But if most readers don't as well...
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

