05-10-2017, 11:42 PM
OK been thinkin' about it (and it hurts my head!)
Let's take it a coupla lines at a time....If this revision to the 1st 2 and last 2 lines, sounds like I'm more on the right track, it'll help me make further revisions:
Shoot the breeze all ‘round logic trees from ideas only just begotten.
Root square and cube stored in vacuum tube computed then forgotten.
What sayeth you all?
PS I am going for a "list poem" as Janine mentioned tho' I didn't really know it from the get go...
Let's take it a coupla lines at a time....If this revision to the 1st 2 and last 2 lines, sounds like I'm more on the right track, it'll help me make further revisions:
Shoot the breeze all ‘round logic trees from ideas only just begotten.
Root square and cube stored in vacuum tube computed then forgotten.
What sayeth you all?
PS I am going for a "list poem" as Janine mentioned tho' I didn't really know it from the get go...