Akathisia
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another comment regarding the "around and around": i think it reads like a mantra... the subject focussing on his body, although not by his own volition and without a means to resist.

in your poem the chemical straitjacket is cruelly observed and described.
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Akathisia - by Mark Cecil - 11-02-2016, 09:34 AM
RE: Akathisia - by RiverNotch - 11-02-2016, 01:23 PM
RE: Akathisia - by rayheinrich - 11-02-2016, 08:58 PM
RE: Akathisia - by Mark Cecil - 11-03-2016, 04:11 AM
RE: Akathisia - by Brownlie - 11-03-2016, 11:29 AM
RE: Akathisia - by Krakus - 11-03-2016, 12:18 PM
RE: Akathisia - by CRNDLSM - 11-06-2016, 04:15 AM
RE: Akathisia - by rayheinrich - 11-07-2016, 11:02 PM
RE: Akathisia - by vagabond - 05-10-2017, 07:08 AM



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