Christmas Beggars
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ahh.. a fake mary and a real christ. that is original.
but the "poor" child serves only to ignite the reader´s anger towards those .. parasites, trash, impostors..

sorry, this is no constructive critique, it´s the sarcastic response that poem evokes in me.
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Christmas Beggars - by Erthona - 12-27-2016, 11:45 AM
RE: Christmas Beggars - by dukealien - 12-27-2016, 11:46 PM
RE: Christmas Beggars - by RiverNotch - 12-28-2016, 12:49 AM
RE: Christmas Beggars - by vagabond - 05-10-2017, 06:18 AM



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