Zap!!! (Lyrics)
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On a boat in the sky, we're floating on steam,
the sun and the moon, stars in between.
Gliding along the stream unseen,
where wind and misty water team,
the gleam in her eye begins to dream.
Electric language longs for meaning.

Into the sea, the rocket ship slips.
Everything under the surface lip flips.
Urging forward, losing its grip,
the structure, ruptured, rips in strips
while sipping words that begin to drip
electric language, love eclipsed.

Traveling on this train in a trance,
a surging impulse serves to enhance
the primitive engine energy chants.
As tunnel walls crumble, extinguishing lamps,
heaven and earth merge at a glance.
Do we have what it takes to go the distance?

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(04-29-2017, 05:53 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  On a boat in the sky, we're floating on steam,
the sun and the moon, stars in between.
Gliding along the stream unseen,
where wind and misty water team,
the gleam in her eye begins to dream.
Electric language, whatever it means                       

Into the sea, the rocket ship slips.
Everything under the surface lip flips.
Urging forward, losing its grip,
the structure, ruptured, rips in strips
while sipping words that begin to drip
electric language, love eclipsed.

Traveling on this train in a trance,
a surging impulse serves to enhance
the primitive engine energy chants.
As tunnel walls crumble, extinguishing lamps,
heaven and earth merge at a glance.
Do we have what it takes to go the distance?         that last rhyme won´t fit in unless falsely intoned.


i am sorry, i gather neither meaning nor feeling from this..
so i can only comment for the sake of rhyme
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I appreciate the comment, 
Technically, it's the closing song on an album I wrote (theme of dantes  purgatory in my own dream) after the main character meets his mother and is takin to heaven, but since I was focusing on purgatorio I stopped there, and Zap!!! Is the wake up part.  

Boat in the sky turns into a rocket ship in the sea building intensity until the train breaks through the earth, pulsing into a rock and roll orgasm.  Electric music to me is lazy and most people rely heavily on effects to improve their sound, so what is sound but a language of communication.  

Over rhymed, not trying to make you think but enjoy just the sounds of the music and the journey I'm trying to carry you on.  It's a closer that's I guess more fun to play than listen too.  Oh well, thanks for reading!
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