05-10-2017, 12:27 AM
you are artistic with words
reading your poem i pictured frustration concerning the lack of answers, don´t know if that was your intent.
i imagine the subject turning round and round, not seeing the forest anymore because of the vast amount of trees.
of course if one is searching for a forest one can only ever find part of it in a book (21 century ruins my metaphor)
maybe i am too dumb to understand but if that poem is about the answers to the big questions, then what are the questions (or THE question) the subject wants answered?
and don´t say the question is "what is a forest" because that was only a metaphor.
maybe the lack of an exact question is the real absurdity of attempting an answer.
oh my, this reply may again be not very helpful, because i really am not educated enough to improve words or content.
still i gave you all the poem evoked in me.
reading your poem i pictured frustration concerning the lack of answers, don´t know if that was your intent.
i imagine the subject turning round and round, not seeing the forest anymore because of the vast amount of trees.
of course if one is searching for a forest one can only ever find part of it in a book (21 century ruins my metaphor)
maybe i am too dumb to understand but if that poem is about the answers to the big questions, then what are the questions (or THE question) the subject wants answered?
and don´t say the question is "what is a forest" because that was only a metaphor.
maybe the lack of an exact question is the real absurdity of attempting an answer.
oh my, this reply may again be not very helpful, because i really am not educated enough to improve words or content.
still i gave you all the poem evoked in me.