05-05-2017, 12:13 AM
(05-04-2017, 11:55 PM)Todd Wrote: If you like the internal rhymes keep them. If you think the rhymes are damaging clarity or misrepresenting the content remove them.OK. Makes sense. This is going to be a tough edit. If I make things too understandably cut-and-dry, it defeats the purpose.
I think that's more of a stylistic choice honestly.
This is going to take a few hikes, maybe a couple of long drives and some good ol' head scratchin' to strike a balance.