05-04-2017, 11:55 PM
(05-04-2017, 11:53 PM)Szczepan Wrote: [quote="ellajam" pid='227916' dateline='1493908525']If you like the internal rhymes keep them. If you think the rhymes are damaging clarity or misrepresenting the content remove them.
Quote: still don't give up, edit.
if so, should I bag the internal rhymes? Suppose that I'd almost have to.
I think that's more of a stylistic choice honestly.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson