05-04-2017, 11:35 PM
Quote:no matter how you try or who you listen to, you can never figure out the big questions.That I got from the title, so I knew where the poem was heading but that just wasn't enough for me. Maybe I could have, or should have gotten the angels/pin line but I think a coherent sentence instead of 3 fragments on that line might have helped.
Don't give up on it, mine is just one member's read, let's see what others come up with, if they don't do any better still don't give up, edit.
PS: All types of poetry are welcome here, variety/spice yanno.
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