Early Dawn_ReVision 1+ title revision
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Early Dawn (title revision)

blue as sky:
      azure.
dreams as dandelions:
     wild.
wind as water:
     crisp
       &
tomorrow
     wakes
 
     sometimes
     too
     soon.
 
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blue as sky
      azure
dreams as dandelions
     wild
wind as water
     crisp
tomorrow
     wakes
 
     sometimes
     too
     soon
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....

(Chris Martin)
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Early Dawn_ReVision 1+ title revision - by LunaDeLore - 05-03-2017, 03:23 AM
RE: Morning comes too fast - by Lizzie - 05-09-2017, 11:09 AM
RE: Morning comes too fast - by LunaDeLore - 05-10-2017, 02:02 AM



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