Engaged

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I just want to be able to say  --Remove "just", its passive and takes away from the poems vigor
I let this world seize me
And that I reached out and
Seized it too.
Not the day,                          --Replace "the" with "a" if you'd like.
Not the moment,
I just want to be able to say  -- See first note
That whatever the timeline,
No matter the outcomes:
Me and this world
Had our sweaty hands all over each other.  --Try replacing "all over each other" with "all through each other" .  I think it sounds a bit bland for an ending, even though the idea is really great.  Use your own creativity here.