THREATS
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Hi all, here's an attempt at a revision.  

THREATS
 
Staring at their faces
I know it better be good   
Threats don’t always work
Even though they should
 
My glares will scare
My words will astound
My volume will rise, I’m not messing around
 
Time out is soft
Naptime is weak
Intimidation can never sound meek
 
I want them to know
I’m nobody’s stooge
My wrath should be epic, unforgettable, huge
 
The Earth will tremble
The mountains will rock
Is a year without food, too much
to pick up a sock?



And this is the original:

THREATS

Staring at their faces
I know it better be good
They don't always work
Even though they should

Something to scare
Something to astound
Something that shows I'm not messing around

Timeout is soft
Naptime is weak
It's gotta be something that doesn't sound meek

I want them to know
I'm nobody's stooge
The threat should be epic, unforgettable, huge

The Earth will tremble
The mountains will rock
Is a year without food, too much
to pick up a sock?
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Messages In This Thread
THREATS - by hesawacko - 01-10-2017, 07:23 AM
RE: THREATS - by CRNDLSM - 01-10-2017, 07:33 AM
RE: THREATS - by HopeVictoria56 - 01-10-2017, 11:33 AM
RE: THREATS - by ThatOneGuy - 01-13-2017, 10:38 AM
RE: THREATS - by jrgxng - 01-13-2017, 01:22 PM
RE: THREATS - by Rogo - 01-14-2017, 09:49 AM
RE: THREATS - by voodoochild - 01-17-2017, 08:53 AM
RE: THREATS - by JasonM. - 01-22-2017, 07:17 AM
RE: THREATS - by hesawacko - 04-11-2017, 02:37 AM
RE: THREATS - by burrealist - 04-11-2017, 02:57 AM
RE: THREATS - by nibbed - 04-11-2017, 03:58 AM
RE: THREATS - by 18sawe - 04-13-2017, 09:36 PM
RE: THREATS - by headybeach - 04-24-2017, 01:27 AM
RE: THREATS - by Szczepan - 05-04-2017, 04:31 PM



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