Engaged

[Paul Welsh]

I just want to be able to say
I let this world seize me
And that I reached out and
Seized it too.
Not the day,
Not the moment,
I just want to be able to say
That whatever the timeline,
No matter the outcomes:
Me and this world
Had our sweaty hands all over each other.

Hello Elizazile.
I'd change personal narrative to third person, delete "I".  Not sure what lines 5 & 6 are doing?  See one poem in two parts, like that quirk. Ending is a strong great white biter.