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[burrealist]

[quote='burrealist' pid='226705' dateline='1491335027']
I outline a house beneath some tile -- I really want this to be "tiles". And not just "some" either -- a more descriptive adjective would be better. "Some" is a filler and it's pretty obvious it's there to hold your meter.

"Grey" is what I chose. I was gonna try a two-syllable word, but grey seemed most fitting.