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Thud.

Thud.
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#11
03-13-2017, 12:01 PM
I pictured a book dropping,
something in another room.
Silent throb was wonderful!
I like the parenthesis, too,
they reveal a soul's
remarkable & irresistible sparkle.
enjoyed
there's always a better reason to love
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Messages In This Thread
Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 03:37 AM
RE: Thud. - by CRNDLSM - 02-27-2017, 03:48 AM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 04:55 AM
RE: Thud. - by muteyy - 02-27-2017, 06:21 AM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 11:56 AM
RE: Thud. - by Lizzie - 02-28-2017, 01:55 AM
RE: Thud. - by RiverNotch - 02-28-2017, 11:25 PM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 03-01-2017, 12:47 AM
RE: Thud. - by worros - 03-07-2017, 02:49 PM
RE: Thud. - by tommyb - 03-13-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: Thud. - by nibbed - 03-13-2017, 12:01 PM
RE: Thud. - by glennerdwilliams - 03-24-2017, 01:55 PM



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