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03-07-2017, 02:49 PM
This is definitely intriguing. I like the mirroring of the first two stanzas. To me it makes me think of how we second guess things and don't trust our instincts anymore. The ending finishes this out for me because as nothing comes of the thuds your character though they heard they move on and realize how silly it was. Good job.
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Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 03:37 AM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 04:55 AM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 11:56 AM
RE: Thud. - by RiverNotch - 02-28-2017, 11:25 PM
RE: Thud. - by Flos Campi - 03-01-2017, 12:47 AM
RE: Thud. - by worros - 03-07-2017, 02:49 PM
RE: Thud. - by tommyb - 03-13-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: Thud. - by glennerdwilliams - 03-24-2017, 01:55 PM
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