03-07-2017, 02:27 PM
I answer the wind with bars of my own,
Ripping and riffing until I feel right at home.
I love these lines specifically because me and my brothers all play guitar and music has been a driving force in my life. I was in symphonic band so this hits home not exactly the way you describe but I still feel it. I do feel like your meter is a bit off and some of the lines are a bit long. Also in the beginning it seems like you're talking about singing and then you mention riffing like you're playing guitar so you might want to clear that up.
Ripping and riffing until I feel right at home.
I love these lines specifically because me and my brothers all play guitar and music has been a driving force in my life. I was in symphonic band so this hits home not exactly the way you describe but I still feel it. I do feel like your meter is a bit off and some of the lines are a bit long. Also in the beginning it seems like you're talking about singing and then you mention riffing like you're playing guitar so you might want to clear that up.