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#18

02-28-2017, 07:00 AM

To be honest I didn't really care for the pun that much either, but I felt like ending on the giving up part made sense and was struggling to find a way to phrase it. I'm not really sold on the ending in this edit, but I recognise that the previous one was also lacking.

All of the true things I am about to tell you are shameless lies.

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RE: Forge - by Donald Q. - 02-03-2017, 08:26 AM

RE: Forge - by RiverNotch - 02-03-2017, 10:34 AM

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