Will and Representation

[RiverNotch]

thanks for the feedback! here's an edit posted: pictures rearranged in an attempt to better structure the narrative, plus a slight cleaning up of "wings, loins". "seated, flying, fallen" was the one straightforward reference to the narrative behind both the poem and the Vrubel paintings (which themselves were based on the narrative of the long poem by some French or Russian romantic poet I forget entitled [I think] "the demon"), but i agree that they may need a bit of sprucing up; and for the choppy rhythm, that was my attempt at capturing Vrubel's rather choppy style of composing images, and maybe it worked, maybe it didn't.