Answer the Wind

[mcauburn]

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I like a happy poem about music, but as Kole has pointed out, you need to tighten the rhythm, and I'd perhaps try to use more concrete imagery.

Also the last two lines sounded a bit over-sexual, although maybe I'm just being childish (It often happens)

Frets, bars, chords, riff, hair blown back, what additional imagery would you add to the poem for a musician?  Also, no sexual overtones intended.  Tell me, what lines are sexual from your perspective?  Thank you for your feedback.

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I'll work on the rhythm.