02-23-2017, 06:59 PM
Blossoms in bloom is repetitive. I'm wondering why you have both, maybe I'm missing something. You can just cut "in bloom" or you could change blossoms to trees, twigs, branches, something.
(03-30-2012, 05:35 PM)billy Wrote: bees harvest pollen
from apple blossoms in bloom--
need more honey pots
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