a haiku
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(03-30-2012, 05:35 PM)billy Wrote:  bees harvest pollen
from apple blossoms in bloom-- I don't think you need 'from' or 'in', so maybe choose another 2 syllable word to get to seven?
need more honey pots -- this could be taken so many ways
Either lovely or funny, depending on how I read it.
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a haiku - by billy - 03-30-2012, 05:35 PM
RE: a haiku - by Lizzie - 02-23-2017, 12:32 PM
RE: a haiku - by ellajam - 02-23-2017, 06:59 PM
RE: a haiku - by just mercedes - 02-24-2017, 09:46 AM
RE: a haiku - by nibbed - 02-26-2017, 04:03 AM



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