Fly
#19
Billy, your comments were mostly general and very negative, and you sounded dissatisfied with most of the poem.  How useful is it for me to hear that?  Good critiques are always constructive.


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Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-16-2017, 10:44 PM
RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 09:54 AM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 10:17 AM
RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 10:42 AM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 12:44 PM
RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 12:53 PM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-17-2017, 03:44 PM
RE: Fly - by amaril - 02-18-2017, 04:47 AM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 06:57 AM
RE: Fly - by amaril - 02-18-2017, 08:17 AM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 10:39 AM
RE: Fly - by Donald Q. - 02-18-2017, 08:59 AM
RE: Fly - by CRNDLSM - 02-18-2017, 09:43 AM
RE: Fly - by billy - 02-18-2017, 01:03 PM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 01:47 PM
RE: Fly - by billy - 02-18-2017, 02:13 PM
RE: Fly - by Achebe - 02-18-2017, 01:56 PM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 02:08 PM
RE: Fly - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 05:53 PM



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