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02-17-2017, 12:53 PM
(02-17-2017, 12:44 PM)Caleb Murdock Wrote: So you really do like that ending better? When I first wrote the original ending, I just loved it -- but no one else has.Haha, I don't B.S. my critiques, so yes I really do like it better.  But, you know what they say: good poetry takes time. There's no need to rush edits. |
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RE: Fly - by Lizzie - 02-17-2017, 12:53 PM
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