02-03-2017, 08:26 AM
I guess I will have to give in and remove my stupid pointless pun; you guys got me bang to rights on that one. I will work on a new edit... does anyone have any more comments in line with that of amaril's about the narrative of the poem... does it need to go somewhere? I feel like maybe it's fine for it to end without resolution, because the whole poem is kind of unsatisfied? Or am I just being lazy?