Event Horizon

Event Horizon

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01-28-2017, 12:48 AM

Hey,

"Event Horizon", I'm more attracted to the title in some way, but great short poem nevertheless.
I would keep the semi colon though and even add a period in the last sentence, marking the "end". Good stuff Smile

Cheers!

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Event Horizon - by Tiger the Lion - 01-10-2017, 03:29 PM

RE: Event Horizon - by Magpie - 01-13-2017, 04:43 AM

RE: Event Horizon - by Lizzie - 01-15-2017, 01:56 AM

RE: Event Horizon - by Alexearth - 01-28-2017, 12:48 AM

RE: Event Horizon - by RiverNotch - 01-28-2017, 10:15 PM

RE: Event Horizon - by Tiger the Lion - 02-08-2017, 05:36 PM

RE: Event Horizon - by Magpie - 02-09-2017, 12:40 AM

RE: Event Horizon - by laltieri0 - 02-11-2017, 12:38 AM

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