Signs (revised)
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Thanks to all of you for your feedback. With it in mind I have tried a re-write:

Blanketed in the yellow of a low sun
They glow like the signs
Slung over their heads –
GATES 3-4 and i for INFORMATION.
Signifiers of concealed meaning
Which interpretation unmasks.
But how would they seem to an untaught eye?
Uninterpretable - like their faces.
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Signs (revised) - by j56 - 01-20-2017, 11:27 PM
RE: Signs - by CRNDLSM - 01-21-2017, 11:00 AM
RE: Signs - by MadelineAnne - 01-22-2017, 03:12 AM
RE: Signs - by Rogo - 01-22-2017, 10:10 AM
RE: Signs - by j56 - 01-23-2017, 01:24 AM
RE: Signs (revised) - by ellajam - 01-31-2017, 08:34 PM
RE: Signs (revised) - by j56 - 02-02-2017, 02:29 AM



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