01-22-2017, 07:17 AM
Hello, Hesawacko!
I get caught up in poems that are often serious and forget that there are gems such as this.
If it wasn't for the statement in the beginning
'Here's another fatherhood humor poem that could probably use a little help.'
I would of been confused for the first 2 stanzas. I would include something about fatherhood to let the reader know who's talking to who.
Thank you for sharing this poem, it reminds me of dealing with children I would take of and brings back some good memories.
I get caught up in poems that are often serious and forget that there are gems such as this.
If it wasn't for the statement in the beginning
'Here's another fatherhood humor poem that could probably use a little help.'
I would of been confused for the first 2 stanzas. I would include something about fatherhood to let the reader know who's talking to who.
Thank you for sharing this poem, it reminds me of dealing with children I would take of and brings back some good memories.